User talk:Narfil Palùrfalas/Poetry/Fëanor
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Great work Narfil! I can't wait to read more, very well written and poetic. I'll get back to you when I can think of something actually constructive to say. --Hyarion 00:33, 23 July 2006 (EDT)
- Yes, I find it to be one of my favorites that I have started. It'll be pretty long, and I hope it goes as least as well as it has already. But I'm for the most part satisfied, though there are a few instances of awkward verse. What are your opinions of my completed, short poems (Eärendil's Lullaby and Melkorian Chant)? Any suggestions? --Narfil Palùrfalas 21:12, 25 October 2006 (CDT)
Nice work, very thorough. One little thing you might want to check out is the line "twelve powers mighty, Valar called." This is contrary to the later number of 14, which (I believe) is the correct one.
Syllable Question[edit source]
Is "fire" one syllable or two? --Narfil Palùrfalas 22:03, 2 August 2006 (EDT)
- One (after checking various references). --Hyarion 22:01, 25 October 2006 (CDT)
- Thanks. I really need criticism for these compositions. Don't really get it anywhere else. --Narfil Palùrfalas 21:28, 14 November 2006 (EST)
